All Comments on 'In Hope for Happiness - One Shot'

Would have given it 5 stars if you had known where a hymen is located. Apart from that it was good.

I like the way he wrote it. No need for the word hymen. As written its beautiful. Very good story. Good character build up. It flowed naturally. Believable. I dearly love B cup boobs. Too bad she's a vegan tho. Looking forward to more of these two as long as beautifully written like this one. Solid 5 stars.

So very hot and loving too. More please, does he write a best seller now with her to motivate him? Do they have a baby?

I love the way you get drawn into every word. I am definitely going to read it again. I hope there is more to come

I am surprised that there was no mention of her Mother and how similar Hope was to his sister. I am surprised that in the time before his sister's death that there was no mention of his love for his sister and that he could love no other women because his sister was perfect.

Still a good story. Pass me a juicy hamburger please

I know it's fantasy but unless the guys dick is shaped like a pyramid, the initial penetration would've taken her 'virginity.' Small quibble

Interesting idea that a 13-year old would grown into such a sweet and sultry 19-year old and be pining for him the whole time. I love how you crafted the tragedy into her caring for him so he would fall for her. I really enjoyed how you seemed to imply Hope did different things to get his attention through the years and how they never even quibbled. I certainly found it very tender, heart-warming and seductive. By the time they did join, I was all for it and rooting for it to happen. 5 and I hope you will extend this narrative.