All Comments on 'In Hot Water Pt. 03'

by LazyLayoff

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Gaah what is going on?!? This is so good!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Really enjoying this story. Please continue. Thanks.

trite_readertrite_readerover 2 years ago
You're Wrong, You Know"

About that comment in your profile, "...you may have thought, “This isn’t exactly Literotica material.” And I would agree."

This is EXACTLY what Lit needs, and many Lit readers want.

Love the story, love the prose, love the entire concept of "In Hot Water". I miss reading stories that actually have a story. Please keep writing.

ScottishTexanScottishTexanover 2 years ago

Okay, the last several paragraphs were freaking hilarious!!!

Not on your face like in those papyrus pictures we know he looks at.

ROFLMAO!!! 😆 🤣 😂 My side is killing me! Hehehe.

LazyLayoffLazyLayoffover 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the encouragement, everyone. There's more coming soon.

Rancher46Rancher46over 2 years ago

Great story, can't wait to see what happens to these two next. Excellent storyline and good character development. Well done.

vanyevanyeover 1 year ago

"I need to swallow some royalty". Love it. Very engaging.

WatcherEyeWatcherEyeover 1 year ago

Loving this story so far

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Final part of In Hot Water should be out circa 1st of September. Let me know if you have comments or questions.

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