All Comments on 'In-Law Getaway'

Grenefire: Are you going to give your readers a part 2, and maybe 3, and even 4? This was a delightful story, and the sexual buildup was stupendous.

Well that was hot. You missed out the DP and anal ......I hope they are in part two. More please.

The build up was hokie with the BS hot apartment scam, "let's go to my parents": "about time you bring my daughter home to us": "we been married a long time and only met the parents a few times". Lucky you haven't been divorced and she moved home to to mom and dad!!

Seems she was pretty hooked on parents as much as you, why wouldn't she tell you about family lifestyle before marriage or at least earlier in marriage?

2+ pages to get her to get her crying about past history at her parents about something that should have been discussed before marriage or at least early in marriage/story should make this story a 2, but sex and mom and wife make this a 3/4

I'd give it 50 stars!

I loved the story. You need a part 2 to explore the mother son-in-law relationship.

This was pathetic and not worth your time.

Meh his acceptance was too easy

I think she fucked her dad while the MiL kept him busy at the mall, so she was lying when she said she hadn't been doing it anymore. He was being manipulated by the three of them throughout the whole story.

highly erotic tale, please do continue this

Story was dumb but the sex was hot.

Also, i get hard when its hot out. Lol

YummY!! <3

I thought the story was great.. all of it. It was very hot and very erotic. Definitely a fun read. 5stars

Fantastic detailed story. Need more please. Please!

Worst story I dont understand except blowjob no role play..treat women with dignity.

Like it a lot. Good long buildup. Liked the Mom flirting with the so in law & him not quite sure what to do. Nice shower scene. Looking forward to next chapter 👍

WOW! You somehow made it all seem belivable! It definitely deserve more chapters! 9 stars! 10 if more chapters are forthcoming:)

It was erotic as heavenly bliss. That is the way it should have been since the beginning. Who believes there was no incest between the first Family. However, they became ashamed of their nakedness after eating the forbidden fruit.

Abundant pussy hair would have gotten you a rating of five! This was a descent story, very good, but without the mature lady look, hairy pussy, it's only a 4. I am not into the pre-puberty look; I know 2 people who arein prison who favor and like to touch that pre-puberty look.