All Comments on 'In Northern Hands'

Well written. An interesting premise. I would be interested in seeing you develop it further.

This is really good, I enjoyed the first part of this story as well. I hope you have plans to continue this as well.

Hoping for at least a few more chapters !

I like this one so far.

I wondered about the leutenant, she's nice. Hell there all nice, and that's ok. I guess it dosent matter if Carls buddie finds out Raven was ridding Carl, just thinking...

In case you have not realized it,

this is a sequel to -- or, more accurately -- a corollary series to the series titled A Soldier's Story.

The background of that series gives In Northern Hands a richer significance.

Paul in Oklahoma