All Comments on 'In Pursuit'

Excellent writing.

Seductive yet sinister.

Loved it.

Chariots

Extremely captivating. I liked that he had her surrender without any excess violence or crude language. Good work

I enjoyed it a lot. I like how you approach non-consensual sex and rape without having a whole lot of swearing and a violence. Granted rape is a violent act, but if we're going to write about it, it doesn't have to be that way. Kudos!

Another really hot story. One that despite all of the gentleness and calm from the attacker was still scary and built up the anticipation well. I found myself very attracted to this strong and dominant man even if he is a rapist!

I've thought about this story so many, many times. Typically I would just replay it in my mind as I touched myself. It's kept me up on countless nights, and I don't think a story can exist that can turn me on more. Well done! It was also so well-written.

I wonder if the author realizes how convincingly erotic her stories are (?) At my age it's seldom I feel more than appreciation for a well-written tale of sexual pleasure, but this one was brought out the horny 20-yr-old still in me--great job!

I love this story - made me very wet - it would have bee 1000000 times better if the rapist had NOT worn a rubber over his cock.

Bareback is best - especially if you are a rapist!!!..

Thank you for still, a beautiful & delicious story.

Sarah Leather, London England

leathercatsuitgirl@hotmail.co.uk

That other commenter is nuts. I absolutely love that he wore a condom. I wish more authors would include this.

Great story. So well written, and hot af