All Comments on 'In Search of Warmth'

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RastanuraRastanuraover 4 years ago
Hypothermia

That has been proven to be the fastest way to warm a cold body.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Great story and well written. Hope to read more from you x

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Name

You wrote "Beth" over and over again until I got tired of seeing it. What is wrong with saying, she or her? It took away from the story and I almost stopped reading.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Identifying the character is a good thing

I enjoyed the story and disagree with the criticism that "Beth" was used too frequently. So many stories are diminished by confusion about which character is which. Thanks for keeping it unambiguous.

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