All Comments on 'In Step Ch. 06'

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miedsalmiedsalabout 14 years ago
Poor Mark

Kendall seems always to be one step ahead of Mark, rather like Jenna and Ron. Despite their complaints both men seem to be happy with the situation though.

Scotty209Scotty209about 14 years ago
Great

This story has gone in the direction that I had hoped that it would, This was one very hot chapter. I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter or two. I can see that it will be a wild time for all involved.

miniacminiacabout 14 years ago
HOT!!!

This one of the best series I've read. Eager to see the next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Didn't like this turn...

Although I saw it coming. It just doesn't fit that Kendall who is just days into being in love w/Mark would want to share, or that Donna would jeopardize both her and her daughters happiness without a second thought. Mad it much less erotic for me

notmichellenotmichellealmost 13 years ago

Poor George missed out! I had a feeling that three would end up together but that was way hotter than I expected! You also used a different configuration...I though for sure it would haveincluded George/Donna/Kendall. Mark still seems 'on the fence' about the relationships so it was a surprise, and a pleasant one at that, to find him included in the first threesome.

ChucksSiteChucksSiteover 12 years ago
OMG, This was hot. I sort of agree....

with Anonymous (how I dislike the use of that no-name) that the threesome would not be good for any of the relationships if this were real-life, but this is a sex story on a sex story portal of a sex oriented web site. Most of us readers expect rather unreal sexual situations and don't get caught up in the details. For me it was close to reality as a teen I saw my fuck-partner's mom nude through an open window (as directed by the daughter for my viewing pleasure), but there was never any thought of going further no matter how lively my fantasies might have been. With the direction this story is taking, I'm expecting a lot more sex between all four and maybe even a sex-party at a wedding rehersal (who knows what lurks in the mind of RonCabo). All I know is that I'm enjoying this series, and I'm off to read the next chapter. Thanks Ron.

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57almost 10 years ago

Super fucking hot!!!! Mom/daughter threesomes with a guy are awesome! Hopefully George will get on board as Donna has done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
wow

bring the rest of it

jott50jott50almost 4 years ago
Hypocrisy??

I noticed that the general consensus of this chapter was that it was hot and positive, whereas the consensus for families take care of families was somewhat negative. The only difference seems to be that In this story it's fmf, whereas in the proceeding family takes care of family was mfm. Some commenters even called the wife a whore. Myself I loved both and while I have never experienced either scenario both were equally hot imho.

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Thanks to all of you who have read and enjoyed my stories. I appreciate all of the comments, both good and the few not so good, and the high ratings. If you are new to my stories, it would probably be helpful to read them in the order they were written. The newer stories mi...

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