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Harryin VAHarryin VAabout 8 years ago
obvious

just sayin'

Erika281Erika281about 8 years ago
nice :D

it was nice to read something without it containing humiliation beyond measurres, this cathegory is full of that s..t. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Well done.

Other than a few writing flaws, and a pretty obvious plot line, it was a great short story. But honestly, I just love the end joke. It was awesome. Lol

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Hmmmmm

Well, I was convinced she was getting what she deserved, so I guess you got me! Honestly, you have a real insight into the mind of a woman - the fear, the hidden lust, and the eventual capitulation. Keep writing these!

Kacey Owens

kittybunnykittybunnyover 2 years ago

What a plot twist. Brilliant!

morbiusrgmorbiusrgover 1 year ago

Very good story.

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