All Comments on 'In the Arms of a Friend'

by SophiaY

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Great Great story

I felt like I was there on the boat with them. Great wording and feeling. ONLY a lesbian, as yourself, could write an erotic and caring story as this.

Great writing. Please write more of the same.

Kelli

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Beautiful

I love this story and I love your writing style. So fluid and sensual. I felt as though I was riding the waves with your characters. You have talent, keep it up.

ungenderlessungenderlessover 17 years ago
One of the best I've ever read!

I love your writing style; particularly the side notes in parenthesis. The fragmented thoughts of the main character, and sentences to match...the fact that you kept your vision pure at the expense of proper grammar makes me adore you. It was so much easier to become involved with the story that way. You have a unique gift. Please write more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
So good!

Beautifully written. Loved the characters, loved the story, loved the sex. Please keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Wonderful!!

Beautiful use of "language" I just loved it.

FiveWolvesFiveWolvesover 10 years ago
Breathtaking

You write like a dream.

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenalmost 7 years ago
Great story!

Thank you for sharing it with us!

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