by SophiaY
I felt like I was there on the boat with them. Great wording and feeling. ONLY a lesbian, as yourself, could write an erotic and caring story as this.
Great writing. Please write more of the same.
Kelli
I love this story and I love your writing style. So fluid and sensual. I felt as though I was riding the waves with your characters. You have talent, keep it up.
I love your writing style; particularly the side notes in parenthesis. The fragmented thoughts of the main character, and sentences to match...the fact that you kept your vision pure at the expense of proper grammar makes me adore you. It was so much easier to become involved with the story that way. You have a unique gift. Please write more.
Beautifully written. Loved the characters, loved the story, loved the sex. Please keep writing!