All Comments on 'In the Arms of an Angel'

OK, the idea that four months in John has still not understood that Maggie is pregnant is a rather large concept to swallow.

"...hurling towards your thirtieth birthday..."

Pretty sure you mean 'hurtling'.

This is why trying to proofread your own prose is dodgy; you tend to see what you meant to say, instead of what's really written.

Not an auspicious first sentence, but based on the high rating I'm going to give it a look anyway.

Loved it. Appreciated it. I hope the house turned out or turns out well.

One of those Romances one wishes would never end

Read it again, great story

One hell of a good story. Now I'm going to have to read the rest of your work.awesome

Two people who were out of place in their worlds find each other, and find their own place to stand together.

*****

Very enjoyable story! Thank you for sharing it. Definitely a 5!

This is my second reading of this great story. 1st was a "5" ... 2nd is still another "5". Having been to college - I say that equals a "10"

Beautiful and wonderful story. Definitely a five star.🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Thanks for writing this story. I found it very touching. I really felt like I knew the characters. Felt like there's just the right amount of sex in the story and it was described in great detail.

I look forward to reading your other stories.

Really enjoyed 5 Stars

Jtwheels

Good Story 5*

A nearly-perfect Romance, well-told.

Thank You

73

HP

not much I can add to other post , but really enjoyed the story . John had 2 things on his mind . sorry ex wife & family & losing a friend to war.

Man talking about a bunch of pricks for a family they sided with a cheating bitch then she goes for his brother saying she's loved for a long time. She should've gone for in the first place and john was second best well the last laugh is his. No seeing the grandchild on their part.

Stopped at page 3 when the stream outside by the muck pond turned into a small sister somebody installed, and sex seemed so rushed after such a dramatic retelling of past events.

Love the big girls too. Always thankful for our Nation's service members.

A very nice and entertaining story.

I truly enjoyed this wonderful love story! Thank you!

Beautiful. Bravo! Thank you! (i can't think of any other words to add at the moment, as i am overwhelmed with emotions)

First and foremost, I would like to thank you for the portrayal you laid in place of John. PTSD is a nasty demon to fight, especially when one is all alone, fighting the dragon. I completely understand John, and all the turmoil he went thru. Having experienced a somewhat similar sequence of events, I can appreciate his anger and frustration with his biological family. It's at times like that, when one yearns for the tight knit bonds of ones brothers in arms. Who else would be able to empathize with the extreme emotional swings. I am truly happy for John, that someone as respectful as Maggie came into his life. She was the only one that could have saved him, and that is just what she did. Maggie found herself a wonderful and understanding man in the bargain. Quite a benefit for both of them.

This was a wonderful story, and one I will treasure for all time. Again, thank you for your literary work, it has pleased this worn old soldier to no end.

Great story Just Let someone read it over net time before you post it

So the person can point out mistakes of meededen.

Great love story and very moving!

Just too bad his brother's head did not meet the drywall!

Thanks for sharing this tale!

Great characters and very understanding of the emotions involved, particularly with John.

A very powerful, heartfelt, and thought provoking story. 5 Stars!

MoogPlayer

romantic, sexy, and thought provoking.

I liked this story because its not just about sex its about love. It also shows what our soldiers go through every day when they come home, and I think in this rendition it pays tribute to the sons, brothers, daughter, and sister that are over there every day fighting for our great nation, and for those that dont make it home. We salute them, and thank you for the great story I almost cried at that PTSD flashback in the rain keep writting.

I sobbed like a baby when you wrote about John's PTSD episode in the rain. I know a couple of people that suffer/have suffered from it and it's peripheral damage to their lives.

Also, thank you for not giving him a ten inch dick. I get so tired of that on this site.

The rest of the story was also beautifully written.

When you write about a veteran and you depict him this way, all vets are honored peripherally. Thank you.

DP

Loved this story. I wish you could keep it rolling.

However your stories are worth it. Great depth and wonderful emotions. Thanks for sharing.

IDB.

I love the depth of feeling and characters of your story. It soooo refreeshing to read a story that lasts more than one page and they're not fucking all the time. Keep up the good work. Also good luck on your home. I am in the process of finishing up a major home renovation project myself.

F***ing Oregon hippies. His whole family wouldn't make a good pile of crap. other than them great story. keep them coming.

That was incredibly good. I'm so glad I read it, and I'm so glad you wrote it

It was one of the best stories I have read on this site.

I love romance and I love happy endings. I know it doesn't always happen that way in real life, but the writer has control. I'm also a Vietnam era veteran and know many "John" from the strife between then and now. I also know current wives who have gone a long way to "healing" their warriors. It takes a special person to do that.

A very well put together, well written story. I hope there will be more similar stories in the future.

Usually in straight romances you see men who start off being sleek rascals and end up being changed by the virtuous naive woman. In this story, both leads are neither refined or innocent, but they're wild and bombastic and don't take shit from anyone, be it their family, theirfriends or each other. Good read.

i wish it was longer. maybe that back stabbing brother of his comes around wants to kick his ass, so john can kick the crap out of him and it be self-defense. (even if it isnt lets just say it is so that bastard gets what he deserves! lol... hell his whole damn family owe him something before he forgives them.)

With stories as good as this one, this author may enter the ranks of such great writers as MoogPlayer, Jake Rivers, DG hear and The Wanderer. I'm really impressed with the care that was shown for the reader. Just outstanding!

loved the story well written romances are my favourite.... altho i still think that he should have atleast broken some of his retarded family's nose's just because anyone dumb enough to send a wedding invitation to the person who was cheated on whilst fighting in a war deserves it

waiting for the next chapters and there lives in the future

Hi there

Romance? It sure was. As I said to you in feedback before I prefer your lesbian stories but in truth you are such a writer that I enjoy all of your stories.

Glad to see you are getting on with the renovations to the house hahaha ;o))

I hope it won't be too long before you are back ;o))

Take care

*hugs*

Good story indeed. I liked it. Come back after the renovations. I know what you're going through...I'm finishing my shop and it's taking WAY too much time.

i loved this story i would love to see a sequel to it it was well written and the few typos/mistakes you made in no way effected the story good luck with the renovations to your house and i can not wait for your next offering

Can't wait for you to update!

Great job, get those renovations done and write more soon, please!

I don't ever leave comments, but your simply amazing! Can't wait to read more about Maggie and John!

If you do not add more to this story later I am going to call "JOHN" and have him get a hold of your Throat until you agree or pass out.! LOL Very good story and I know that anybody that has read it wants more from you on this story or until they at least have 6 kids.!! HEHE

{ Thanks for making an old 69 year old man cry ** it has been since Nam that I have shed a tear.!} You did good.*

I really liked this story a lot. The characters felt very believable and were easy to relate to, as well as the story itself being rather plausible yet still creative.

The fact that the ending left room to add to the story also leaves a little hope to hear more from these characters.

absolutely beautiful and amazing. Brought tears to my eyes. I hope your reno goes well so you will be back to writing soon.

This isn't a home run, it's a grand slam. A tremendous story about two needy people who find peace with each other. Hopefully not the last we will hear of Maggie and John

Excellent read....... think about not ending this story yet. Thanks..... Sam Alston

Please consider continuing this story. Wonderful job! No worries on any typo's! :)

You venture out of your normal type of story and hit a home run. I'd say that is mark of an author, not just a writer. Loved the way you gave some plot hints then veered away from the obvious. Good luck with your project and hope you can get back to your writing soon. We need more authors like you on Literotica.

A great story of two needy people finding each other. Good work. Please continue writing after your renovation work is done.

A really great story and thanks for sharing it with us. Keep up the great work and good luck on the renovations

Great story....can't wait for more....good luck with the renos...be careful...and can't wait till you get back on...

i truely am in love with this story. would like to see this one continued. sad to hear i wont be reading from you for a little bit but hey tis life and good luck with the reno's. ill be looking forward to reading from you in the future afterwards.

This is a great piece of work and one of the better written stories I've had the pleasure of reading. Cudos and please keep up the excellent work.

Wonderfull writing. Great plot and character development. The story was a great read. Thank you

I'm a big fan of your work and I must say, you do this kind of story as well as you do your usual ones. Don't worry about the mistakes, none were really noticeable, and if they were then I'm sure your readers will understand. This was great. I'm a bit sad you won't be posting again for a while but thats alright. See you when you get back!