All Comments on 'In the Beginning'

if this story is a proper example of how an introduction to D/s would go.

But your story is very sexy in my opinion and I truly enjoyed reading it.

From the sensuous descriptions of the characters...Veri's confusion...Stosh's softly spoken commands...to the tender mix of passion and lust shared between two so close, this piece of work was breathtaking as well as arousing.

I look forward to reading more of your works.