All Comments on 'In The Dark'

by Monocle

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
fucking fantastick!

i loved loved loved this story- the best i have read yet- made me wish i was the woman- wonderful writing- stirred something in me that i have not been able to feel in a long time, made me think what it COULD be like- thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Unbelievably arousing

I cannot describe what this story did to me . . . my face is hot, my heart is beating faster . . . I think I forgot to breathe at times, but no worries. The gasps made up for it. Wow.

I only hope my own have the same effect on others! Absolutely mindblowing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
where are you?

Dear Mr. Monocle,

Your works have fascinated and titillated my imagination for several years now. I've found myself re-reading some of them over time and finding new understanding and excitement each time. Your talent will be sorely missed. I hope that wherever you are, you still have a chance to write.

ALandRFALandRFabout 13 years ago
Stunning

What phenomenal writing. Incredibly evocative. Some of the best writing I've read -- erotic or otherwise. Thank you for sharing it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Awesome!

Absolutely one of the VERY best ever!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Wow!

This is a very beautiful, powerfully erotic story. Thank you for writing it so well~

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