All Comments on 'In the Dungeon'

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Hornybiman67Hornybiman67about 5 years ago
Nice

That was intense. Being restrained like that is a fantasy of mine.

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationabout 5 years ago
This was...

a decent story line. I was sorta hoping that you'd be able to turn it into a series, but the shift at the end put paid to that.

Anyway, I liked the way you eased him into something more than he'd intended. Nothing like watching someone take a risk. And it played out decently well.

Gotta say, though, the guy who owned him is taking a risk, too. Never know when someone feels desperate enough to do something drastic.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Scorching hot at times

Was also hoping for a sequel (or several) and a long, slow descent into utter depravity. 5 stars!

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