by novabifunone
a decent story line. I was sorta hoping that you'd be able to turn it into a series, but the shift at the end put paid to that.
Anyway, I liked the way you eased him into something more than he'd intended. Nothing like watching someone take a risk. And it played out decently well.
Gotta say, though, the guy who owned him is taking a risk, too. Never know when someone feels desperate enough to do something drastic.
Was also hoping for a sequel (or several) and a long, slow descent into utter depravity. 5 stars!