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All Comments on 'In the Eye of the Beholder'

by ElectricBlue

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OneAuthorOneAuthorover 4 years ago
Very sensual

The imagery in the story was wonderful. Definitely 5 star material.

LoquiSordidaAdMeLoquiSordidaAdMeover 4 years ago

Wow, that was powerful. I love that you managed to maintain that slow, ambling pace even in such a tightly packed, concise story. And I chose the word "story" over "vignette" with great deliberation because you've got real character development and conflict in there. Think piece or not, it's a moving tale. Well done.

cmj711cmj711about 1 year ago

Your talents remind us there is more to sex than climaxing. Much more! xox

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A writer of mostly urban erotica, with more café scenes than a classic French movie; occasional departures to more fantastic worlds, off planet and on.