All Comments on 'In the Giant's Shadow'

by KeithD

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Good

You write well, but the point of view is off on occasion in the beginning. I love this, though, the plot and characters are lovely. I hope you continue it.

SugarShark13SugarShark13over 2 years ago

Another great story Kevin. I guess in the end he got all he wanted. But some how I think he is a fool for not taking Winston's offer. But in the end, it looks like he will still be able to build the home.

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