by SilkenLace
Very well written. I enjoy seduction stories and there are not enough of them in my opinion. This is, by far, one of the better ones.
My pussy is absolutely DRIPPING! Absolutely loved it! Please, please keep writing ... I beg you! x
You called her clitoris a "female penis". The clitoris is NOTHING like a penis, period, not in any way, shape, or form. As a lesbian, I felt insulted with that comparison, just as a man would be if you compared any part of his intimate body anatomy with a woman's. Have you ever heard of the Vagina Monologues? The clitoris is unique, one of a kind, and should be celebrated as such by women, not as some sort of stunted male part, which it is not. End of tirade.
I have a friend who read the first page and loved it. My friend wanted to leave the conclusion to the imagination.
This was a fully believable and very well told story. I loved the tension built up in Judith, and the way her friend (and Mel, well, sort of) protected her. Mel is quite the matchmaker, eh?
The seduction in Judith's place was soooo smooth, and done with such genuine caring and lust. I haven't checked your other submissions, but if you have not yet done the next morning, I hope you do. Also, I hope you let Brenda in on the scene. She seemed to be holding a torch for Judith. In any event, you should write more.
I have thoroughly enjoyed all your stories. All beautifully written and highly erotic in a sapphic sense. But this story about Judith is my favorite. Love it.
I loved it! Starts slowly but never boring. I knew what the story was about but I was still surprised at the path it took. Great job! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️