by TasiaDawn
Beautifully written managing to avoid the worst old cliches but sustaining an intense eroticism throughout. It's fresh, very sensuous and hugely erotic.
Sad to see this is TasiaDawn's only submission, yet,and hope to see further work very soon
That was beautifully written... different in it's own way only because it's so uncommon to see such well written words strung together as well.
I can't wait to see your next story.
Just the right amount of everything. i absolutely loved it. i hope this is not the last i read from this author.
Stunningly beautiful without the cliches so often found in writing these days. Yes, sex can be carnal and tender, heated and sacred, elemental and loving. It's ashame you don't have more than 2 stories. Please write more... erotica needs your sensual vibrance!