All Comments on 'In the House of Spite Ch. 01'

All of these characters are so vivid. It's like you're not writing fiction but describing real people. By the end, I was so caught up in all the characters and Pearl's cleaning routine (I liked that you included that), that I had forgotten this was a non-human story. Then I got to those last three paragraphs and thought, "wait, what?"

And now I just realized, ohhh, the dog hair.

Have been looking out for a new story from you. Had to re-read The Contest after finishing The Ant Woman. You really are a talented writer. You have a way of captivating your readers.

Looking forward to more of this. Thanks!