All Comments on 'In the House of Spite Ch. 17'

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Calcifer267Calcifer267about 4 years ago
Great story weird political input

Great story but can’t you talk about trafficking women without having to make it an issue about Mexicans crossing the border illegally or overstaying visas? All those sections feel very forced and unnatural to the conversation. Reiterating your point multiple times about how Darren hates people who come to the country illegally serves no point to the story.

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