All Comments on 'In The Mist'

Very likely - but I think you probably meant 'hopped'!

Could be the beginning of a good story. I wish you had written more in this first chapter.

This is the start of something good!!!!!!!!! Thanks for sharing this little gem it really has me going.

I sure hope you decide to continue with this story.

I liked this one. Will there be a continuing chapter?

Now that one made hair on my arms stand up.