All Comments on 'In the Morning'

by ElectricBlue

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ReefBeachReefBeachalmost 8 years ago
Almost poetry

Amazing writing; love the tumbling cascade of sensations, the grammar falling apart with the orgasms!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Beautiful!

You paint such a lovely picture with words. It borders on being poetic. Thank you for inviting me to read...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Fucking amazing

Thank you.

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A writer of mostly urban erotica, with more café scenes than a classic French movie; occasional departures to more fantastic worlds, off planet and on.