All Comments on 'In The Shadow of The Moon Ch. 09'

Very exciting chapter.Well worth the wait for me.It;s good to see Victoria change for the better. The way her father trained her is definitely an asset in the war.Love the progression of this.

Great chapter!

So happy to see new chapters to this series. I love the way you are writing it and look forward to the continuation and progression.

I've been waiting for you to continue writing this story, doing my little happy dance now.

and it's not like some of the stories that have YEARS between chapters (one story I really like hasn't been update for 3 1/2 years). Your writing continues to improve, and each chapter is better edited. There are still some spelling and grammar errors here and there, and occasionally confusing format changes, but not nearly as disruptive to the flow as in earlier chapters. Both Antony and Victoria are maturing nicely and they continue to evolve as characters. I am enjoying your story and look forward to the next offering.

I love this story. Hopefully one day you will get to continue it. Til then.

please finish.

you and your cliff hanggers hope you are not likea few other of the authors that said they would finish then not finish for what ever reson just want you to know that i love your story while there were a few grammer errors nothing that took away from the story in my book i love it and hope that you finish it

Please please finish!!! It's a great read and I'm dying to know the ending!!

Hope all is well, are you going to finish this story??

Please come back and finish

I agree with the others please finish the story

Very exciting story and lore. Even if you never post the rest, what you have given us so far is great. Thank you.