by coloquintida
The style blew my mind, you can feel the tension just by reading it... Keep it up, it's awesome
I know this; I see all the action hiding among your words. Taking a long hot shower while my wife's in Europe, missing her, pouring shampoo on the handle of the shower squeegee, fucking myself long and slowly . . .
This is really beautifully written - ‘the smudge of your nipples’ is a great image.
Thank you.