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by AllTheBetterNamesWereTaken

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2cats2catsabout 7 years ago
Story 1 - Let's hope for many more

Well done, 2 pages, real characters, emotions, and story real enough to be true, or not.

AllTheBetterNamesWereTaken marked as a favourite

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
You're all alone on this site - excellent - do it again please.

Little dialogue good. Thoughts and feelings good. Responses to each other, good. All is good. Do it again please.

texquilltexquillabout 7 years ago

I don't expect this author to stay around Lit too long - he (or she) is headed for great things. This is a well-constructed and well-written story with believable characters who draw the reader in. Five stars, plus a new "Favorite Author" designation.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Very Well Written

Five stars and a Bravo!

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userAllTheBetterNamesWereTaken@AllTheBetterNamesWereTaken
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This is a really long user name. "BetterNames" is probably a good abbreviation. Ummm... here, writing is a fun game/challenge. If people want to challenge me to a particular story/setting go ahead and PM or however this place works.