by Human_Primacy
Excuse me there seems to be a problem with your post for this is but a taste of the story we wish to read! And a great start it was, please continue!! I look forward to seeing where this goes. Hopefully with longer chapters, even if only slightly so.
This is a relatively unique story compared to most that involve a Succubus Summoning. I'm looking forward to where the characters go from here. I would like to know what the two main characters Lorelei and her Master look like though. At the very least, some defining characteristics.
Everything about this is fabulous. The inner voice of Lorilei is so entertaining. I plan to enjoy this story immensely. Keep up the good work.
A talented writer but the subject matter is rather disturbing to me (violating fundamental rights, physical and psychological torture).