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by 4glory6

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Well written

Interesting and entertaining. Not much of an ending. Hope you continue writing and giving us plots that are out of the ordinary, such as this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
nice one

a touch mixed, but real fun.

ofLebanonofLebanonover 12 years ago
Good concept

Rushed execution. Keep trying. Dont be afraid to let your story develop fully instead of rushing from sex scene to sex scene.

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