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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
viewpoint challenge

I usually don't like the use of 2nd-person (you did this or that) in a story. Your story was exceptional. I don't know if it would have been as good without the 2nd-person. Descriptions were vivid and believable. Great work--hot story.

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