by ScrappyPaperDoodler
Over the top? Sure. Fun read? Absolutely! Love the blend of sex and complex relationships that are developing. Don't get too far in the weeds with the sex and risk losing the true intimacy your characters are sharing. 5*
I have enjoyed all six chapters of this story. I hope you will finish it. Thanks.
Thank you for the kind comments!
Demosthenes, you can count on the intimacy being my primary focus going forward! I’m all about learning, and your commentary is always appreciated :-)