All Comments on 'Incest Planet Ch. 01'

Stopped 1/2 way down page #1. Dumbest thing I've read for a LONG time.

Having read a lot of terrible writing here on LitE, I can definitively say this: I've seen worse, but not by much.

The plot was hackneyed, the writing was riddled with typos and grammatical errors, the dialogue was bland, it seems like there are chunks of the story actually *missing* and the characters were all over the map with everything from motive to fetishes.

If you're going to write, by all means, write what interests you. But if you're going to share it with others, at least make a half-assed attempt to make it enjoyable for them. Accepting that this was primarily a BDSM story, the elements of sci-fi and incest barely even registered as plot devices, so I'm not entirely convinced that this was placed into the proper category/genre.

Rather corny.