All Comments on 'Incestuous Bedtime Tale Ch. 02'

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cageysea9725cageysea9725about 2 years ago

Learn English. You're not good enough at it to perform in public.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

@cageysea9725 why don’t you write a story? It’s funny how critical you are yet you don’t have a published story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

These first two chapters needed editing. consider that food for thought. That said, not just hot, but WHITR HOT! I can't wait to read what happened to Ava's mother/sister after dinner.

cageysea9725cageysea9725about 2 years ago

Dear Anonymous. Google my user name. Enough sites thought my writing here was good enough to pirate. But you can be the judge if you're smart enough to use Google.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Always the obsession with anal.

What kind of mental illness is it that makes people love soft scat?

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Erotic author been writing since 2013. I've had two stories blocked by literotica for being written by AI, Bimbo App Santa's Naughty Gift 3 & Mommy's Incubus Son Comes of Age 14. That one was rejected 4 times despite my protests. Talked to site admin and she just sent me a lin...