All Comments on 'Incestuous Harem 01'

Fuck, that was so hot!

I swear ive read this before

Great story. I enjoyed the different perspectives. 5-stars.

A good start. I look forward to reading more of Clint's erotic couplings.

This is a great start to the series i cant wait for more

A slow start, but it heated up before becoming another boring story.

Great start, 5 stars.

FYI

Sex with cousin is NOT incest, might be taboo some places.

I have read this story at another site several years ago, or very close to it. I liked it then, and look forward to reading further chapters here. Thank you for a very enjoyable story.

I gave it a 5 because there is no 6 available.

Can’t wait for the next chapters!!!

Can’t wait for the next chapters

Wow !!! what a start. I really like your story; you did a very good job bringing to life all of a young man's thoughts. With two houses full of pussy that needs to be delt with. What a lucky young man. The way you justify his thought process possibility to take charge of these females with the dream of the conversation with his deceased father is great. I can't wait for the next work from you. Great job so fare. Keep all us readers up and ready for more. A reader in Florida, Four Stars leaning towards Five

Wasn't really a fan of your other stories. And did not rate them. But this story started good. 5 stars for this one.

Super hot! Be proud of your work! It even motivated me to get out of bed and do the dishes. Can't remember the last time jack-off material motivated me to do anything afterwards. 5/5

I’ve read this before. Either stolen or a rerelease. If new then it is a complete ripoff. -5 stars

I read it somewhere else and forgot about it. Good to see it here. 5 stars.

for the record this story is not stolen or a ripoff. the author is posting here under the same penname as the other site. just getting it on here for another audiance to see

Can’t wait for the next chapter!

What an excellent premise for a LONG SERIES !

Too bad you can only vote 5 stars. I would give it a 10 plus.

hey, I read this before in your site! welcome to Literotica!

awesome

I'm very impressed by your ability to develop these characters and this plot as efficiently as you have. Great work!

Damn that was spicy! 5 stars

Simply Great

First, this is a HOT, HOT, HOT story...starts off very well and builds to a good point to end the first chapter...

Clint...kinda an ASSHOLE, not being too gentle about popping Melody's cherry...was a little brutal...appears she did not mind tho'...

This is well-written, so far, hope you keep it up in the next chapters!!

Great story. Very hot. You did a great job giving the reader a feel for the characters.

5⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

I really liked this story keep it coming.

Great story, but balls don't contain semen, the prostate does, so balls can't "unload" ...

Loved it

My dick is rock hard and leaking reading this. Well done!

I remember first reading this story on xnxx stories a few years ago. I'm glad it is here on Literotica.

Like the story a lot. AAAA++++

Loved it.

Written with assurance and poise, crisp and elegant language. Suffused with eroticism and the longing preceding a first time. One of the best writers on Literotica!

I fully realize that all of the incest/harem crowd out there get incredible hard ons when they read about a son fucking his own mother. Fortunately, when it comes to incest stories, you guys are the vocal minority. I'm under no illusions here and I already, know that this author is going to have his Main Character fuck both the mom and her sister. I'll read it anyway because Clint and Melody hooking up piqued my interest and I'll probably enjoy most of the scenes with Clint fucking his sisters and the other cousin, LeAnn. But don't expect to get any 5s out of me. Depending on how far down the cross generation hole you go will directly affect the lower scores that I'm going to give you. Having Mom and her sister come out as lovers was very hot though. It's a crying shame that you can't just leave it at that. 4/5

I loved the build up and the lead into the next chapter. It was very hot and exciting, also the going back and forth between the characters

Great work

Finally a guy takes charge

First time reading this, prediction: they're not cousins, they're half-sibs

We are off to a great start. Fucking smoker 🔥☄️❤️‍🔥

Main character is an absolute LOSER. A boy in every sense of the word.

Love it, more please. which one is pregnant first or are all of them knocked up?

a great start, and a great premise. I hope this story won't be ruined by adding other men like many other stories on this site

Your she's of them are absolutely clashing all over the place

Great ! Five stars.

PP