All Comments on 'Incestuous Harem 04'

Such a spectacular series

oh my god, please keep this going. This is so hot!!!

This series is by far the sexiest thing I’ve read in quite a while. Bravo, mypen

You guys like this so much, why don't you go to storiesonline.net and read the whole series? Along with all the other stuff he seems to be reposting over here to get a larger readership. Go, log in, search his name and to to the page. Story after story, this guy is really good. Gets kinda formulaic after a while, but what the hey, it is sex after all and he does a good job. Oh hey pen? Get a thesaurus, kay?

Need to keep his love for his women more at the forefront. I get Melodie is #1 but has aling of Alicia seemed more like just dominating her. 5* but only almost…

You left the Xbox mic on

please dont stop there

The harem grows.

5/5

It is better than the normal cuck-shit that pervades around here

Fantastic. But balls don't have cum ...

Another good chapter. I am enjoying the story. AAAA+++++

And I’m so amazed how fast you are to produce these chapters. I love that you’re not like other authors who take months to upload the next chapter of their series. And I can’t wait for Clint to fuck his older man-eating sister. Thank you so much for this series.

Okay, I really enjoyed the seduction of Alicia. But I didn't like the part that mom played in it. She should have waited until the very end just like you wrote it to be present. Ideally, Melody should have made love to her and had Alicia taste Melody's cum from the source, then have Melody walk her up to her brother's room without all of the fake discipline and spanking. I can't give you a 5 because of the unnecessary bullshit that you used just to have a reason for Clint to spank someone's ass. It was too contrived and it didn't really fit in. 4/5

Great story. Wasn't to big of a fan of the last chapter due to the unsanitary Anal, but this one was a definitely 5/5. Haters will hate and tell you how to write a fictional story, no one asked for their opinion!

Great work

Again, I Love This Story...

Okay, so the last chapter had some 'unsanitary' anal issue's for some people in it. Why, once it started, did they just NOT READ THE STORY, move on/go about their business, and leave the rest of us perverts to our enjoyment??!! The comments left about that, plus the LOW SCORING that affects this author's rating...that is really uncalled for...

Alicia is so sweet, so innocent...yet, she wants to become part of the family. Clint and Melody really should be paying attention to her words, though; this young lady is VERY FRAGILE!! The loss of her father left her wanting...she said it to Clint..."What about me??!! DO YOU LOVE ME??!!" Alicia needs 💘 love, not just sex, but emotional affection, to help her heal! Ignore that, and more damage will be done to her...causing pain to be released on the family!! Careful, there, Clint...

Yyyaaayyy for the series& Oh, Yeah...about the hymen thing...I think this is getting the anatomy a little better than a lot of stories do; I get the feeling it is placed 'correctly', at the opening to the vagina. There is NO indication of it being on the OUTSIDE, as some readers are stating!

Five**5**Stars...and LOTS of kudos!!

@ScottishTexan - Re: Contrived

The whole story is contrived. The entire 'world' so far encompasses 2 houses that are populated with a bunch of needy, horny women that will are waiting for a handsome, dominant man to make them all into his harem; His "Incestuous Harem™". The two sisters being with the one man for most of their adult lives is a little believable, and that they had mostly daughters is again possible. But that just as his son becomes an adult, the Dad gets taken out of the picture and all of the women are in 'need' of a good hard fucking? That's a set up if ever I've seen one. Just read it and enjoy it for what it is, it's never admitted to being remotely realistic.

I think it would have been interesting if mom continued to play oblivious making alicia walk on eggshells. Also alicia better get some growth spurt fast

also, this is moving too fast. in the span of less than 24 hours, he already fucked 3 of the women? and I bet by night he will be fucking another one probably the aunt

Would prefer there not be a pic change at all, but especially not during a sex scene. POV changes are a bit annoying when using "aunt" and "sister"