by mypenname3000
I had to go to the author's story listing to find Chpt 5...so glad I did...now on to Chpt 6...
Love this story..."degrading"?, as another 'reviewer's called these...maybe, but it seems like the girls DO like pleasing Clint; although, Clint could use some manners and restraint at times. Cheryl and Vicky have lived with behavior for years, have apparently "modeled" how girls are expected to conduct themselves, even if subliminally...so, if one objects, Clint needs to pay attention to that!
Still **5**...should be more..
i think there is a person mixup as they tell Alicia about the Mothers, there has to be Aunt Vicky instead of Cheryl
I'm totally losing interest in this now. Clint and Alicia together would be great. And the Queen/Princess thing is fine too. But you keep pushing the water sports bullshit and the BDSM is sliding more and more from simple domination into physical abuse and degradation. Those things turn me off and are ruining what could be a very hot polyamory incest story. 😫 1/5. I'll struggle through one more and see how it goes....
So in the course of basically a day, he courted his cousin/half-sister, mother, then younger sister. The aunt knows, and they’re already doing exhibitionist stuff in public. I’ll give it another part or two but even as fantasy, it seems unbelievable. I feel you as the writer, or he anyway, is trying too hard to be just a “I’m the master” type dom, and really not good at it. Also, the repeated water sports talk, no one is into it, but the “they’ll do it because I want them to” is bs. That’s not how doms work. He would also recognize his “queen” is more a brat, from how I’m reading it at least. Either way… a few more parts but I’m not as excited for the next few parts the rate it’s gone so far.