All Comments on 'Incestuous Harem 07'

And there it is, I'm done with this series. It showed so much promise, only to go down the toilet.

loving every line keep going don't forget there will be orientals and maybe an orgy

I certainly did NOT like chapter, only gave it 2 stars.

I can see want to get even with a family bully, but might have been nice to show the

family being nice to Lee. Showing that dispite the degraduation Lee was still loved by

the family,

wow , i love this series

I'm afraid you lost me with this chapter. This was so hot and could have been so much more but this now needs to be moved to Fetish and out of Incest. You just took it too far for my tastes and by the comments I think a lot more agree. I don't know if I can get back into this even if it changes now. You ask for some comments, maybe you should listen to a few.

The depth of characters is lacking and you threw in watersports so this is the end for me

When I was a little girl my dad would P between my legs on the toilet as a teenager on poker night I would wait in the bathroom for him to cum in and if he was drunk enough would get him to piss between my legs and on my pussy God that was hot

Loved it, except for the error in three next to last paragraph. Other than that, you need to wrap this up in the next two parts. You will have played the story out.

This story has ceased to be good erotica and has morphed into terrible smut.

Time to spend some time on domestic concerns like cleaning the houses, making dinner, and getting things neat and well-organized. There's more to being the man of the house than banging every female in the family, and Clint needs to show it.

THIS is a STORY, Y'all...

As I said a the end of the last chapter, the author has some issue, underlying the story line here...

I like the story, gave it **5*I stars, ONLY because of how nasty it is...I like nasty, reading about it; BUT, it is a story...fantasy...I realize this, and have to wonder about that...

Oh, well...not gonna psychoanalyze all of this...just enjoy the reading

Not into water sports at all real turnoff

2/5

This could have been a great harem Dom/Sub story, Clint could have learned how to grow into a master, maybe even used the dreams of his dad as a sexual spirit guide but motherfucker went from virgin to sadist slut owner sex champ in less than 24hrs.

Pee on. No thank you.

I am not entering a score on this chapter as I knew it was going to be centered on water sports, which turns me off completely. I was forewarned and hope the rest of the story moves on to other kinks.

Not into water sports at all, I think it is wrong. But the chapter is still good. AAAA++

Didn't really care or wanted the urophilia part.

don't care for water sports it's gross and sick but other than that great

Awesome chapter in this story.

(5/20/2022) I am NOT into water sports or humiliation and this was the nastiest chapter I've ever read, EVER. I don't look for this stuff. But hell..., you made it work. 5 stars!!!

Hopefully this is the LAST chapter with water sports. I honestly skimmed through it once they all went into the bathroom. Been enjoying everything else.

The story continues

Great one

The timeline seems overly compressed. The premise of the series is excellent, but this chapter completely threw me off tbh. Not the water play, but when he told Alicia that he’d never love any of the others. Clint went from the man of the house to an immature user in my mind. With that in mind, I somehow doubt there will be any aftercare of the ladies either (which is made worse by the compressed timeline).

I'm not into pissing and should've known it was coming since it was brought up early but I still gave 5* since I liked the previous parts. I know more will come but hope there will be more of the other stuff too. Keep it up.

Not into water sports. Skimmed this one. Did not enjoy.

Like others, i didn't care much for the water sports. And just an fyi here as there appears to be a continuity/accuracy issue here on pg. 3 as Melody speaks.

Love the diversity from pain/humiliation to baby girl. Keep up the great work

Edit "His body shook as he dumped his cum into the little slut's mouth. I leaned forward, grinding my hot flesh on his mouth,"

Should be "he dumped his cum into the little slut's ass" and "grinding my hot flesh on her mouth". Clint is assfucking her while she's eating her sister's pussy.

I'm confused. Is Clint the 'man of the house', or is he an ABUSIVE, immature scumbag. Because, at this point, he SURE seems like a mean, sadistic, manipulative, immature, almost psychopathic boy.

Watersports spoiled the story

Totally unrealistic. No dom that treats girls like this would ever be respected by his women as a dom. This is abusive. No semblance of care or love, including aftercare. He’s going to bang all his family members and doesn’t love half of them. Was the written as a schoolboy who watched too much porn’s wet dream story?

I dont like how the mother seems to just gets brushed off. she is his mother. she should be the most important to him

also, why is every author obsessed with ruining his story by having the main character kiss women with his cum on their lips?

So many of the people in the comments showing they've clearly never delved past the surface of bdsm/kink or putting their own fetish biases forward as criticism.

the watersports were too sick for me. Some people like that stuff. I can understand the spanking and how some people can get off on pain. But a true Dom would treat his woman with better care.

So many of the people in the comments showing they've clearly never delved past the surface of bdsm/kink or putting their own fetish biases forward as criticism.

Obviously you're not involved in the kink community. We know to be respectful instead of being an asshole like you. And yes, this is fucking abusive. Climb back into your incel hole.

Not into water sports but don't demean those that do so have your fun if that's your kink. We all have one so don't knock someone else's and just think of it as to each their own and let it be.