All Comments on 'Incestuous Harem 18'

Quite enjoyable, would very much enjoy a series where Clint breeds the next generation. Just an fyi you might want to fix the birthday typo

On the second page 1st paragraph, you may want to fix clint's age.

Wait.

Clint's seventeenth birthday? So he was 16 when this started? When he started fucking his younger sister? That's gotta be a typo, right? I feel like he was about the same age as 19 year old Melanie

Wow you didn't have to end it I loved it

Except the birthday typo everything was well and this shouldnt be the end i think..

You could of put a epilogue of how and if he made the rest of the family pregnant would of finished the story

"We were celebrating Clint's seventeenth birthday in style"... I KNEW this story was really about high schoolers and not college-aged kids. You just changed the numbers, but because you spelled out seventeen you missed it.

Ick

How is insurance covering all these pregnancies?

There should be a epilogue to finish the story

Good ending. Love it. AAAAAA++++++

This was an incredible series! Thank you for the uncountable number of orgasms! And the fact that you have created an entire universe of stories from this is beyond incredible!

Clint’s 17th birthday? Best fix that quick! Couldn’t enjoy the rest of the chapter with that rattling around in my head…

Without a doubt, the Ellistons are gonna have more babies than the entire Osmond families combined. Their nurseries are gonna resemble hospital's!

Can't help wondering if Melody's daughter will be as much of an exhibitionist as her mother,

(5/21/2022) Yup, I caught that seventeenth birthday slip, but I just added three years to it in my head and moved on. As I wrote earlier I'm NOT into watersports or humiliation for that matter but my favorite character was Lee. To me, she seemed like an overly excited pup constantly getting into mischief. This was a great fantasy and reality does not need to intrude here. Great ending. Ninety stars total for this series.

Well worth reading through it

Great work

Yes, y'all, we ALL caught the slip-up with the "17th" birthday mistake at the beginning...BUT, we all know that Clint started this as a nineteen-year-old college student, as did Melody! QUIT FREAKING OUT, Y'ALL, especially the 'anonymous' come,get who got all 'icky' about 'high schoolers'...nothing to be upset about here!

Odd end to the story...until you go to Dr's story...I have started it...y'all enjoy!

5/5 Stars...but I am glad this is over...just saying...

Damn fine story!!!!

EXCELLENT, except for the minor birthday error.

A long and at times repetitive story, but well worth the time and effort to read, most enjoyable.

How did Clint go down in age? He's been 19 this whole time, then this chapter it says they were celebrating his 17th birthday? Continuity matters even for small things

was the being 6 months pregnant also a typo? because if not you do know a pregnancy is 9 Months right and that them going into labor at 6 months isnt a good thing?

IDK about the rest of you, but I'd rate this story 5 stars on the breastmilk fetish alone!

I guess he’ll make Lee get and abortion or have give her baby up for adoption.

Great story although it would of been better if Alicia got pregnant instead of lee and then there was Clints birthday error but overall great story should continue with the rest of family getting pregnant

I wish you would write about the rest of the Harem getting pregnant.

Celebrating Clints seventeenth birthday? Surprised that got by the censors.