All Comments on 'Incestuous Harem's Passion Ch. 01'

If Tad is the reason the police are on Clint's ass, I think his ass is grass and a certain paralegal just might be the mower!

Clint may have pissed off powerful people in Sacramento with his wanting to make incest and bigamy legal in the U.S., but even powerful people have one or more skeletons in their closet. Meanwhile, it appears that somebody needs to come up with a more better backstory concerning the father of "cousin" Melody. For example, he could have mistakenly thought his niece Leanne was going to be a boy and suggested calling the child Lee Jr..

This story may fill a niche, but it really isn't going to be wide-ranging, crowd-pleasing material, as it denigrates both male and female at the same time; your own story punishes Tad for seducing his sister, because she didn't want to be "slut-shamed," which this story does often. It's more an extreme kind of partial BDSM and should be in that category too. This is what Erica rebelled against, because most women want love, not humiliation. I shouldn't be the first one to say that humiliating a female is never sexy and reducing the sexes to mere animals with instinct doesn't appeal to the masses...it's just not "sexy," although it is very raw--just too raw.

Won't be reading any more and will check out other candidates for "sexiest female in a story."