by mypenname3000
I seriously still think the restraining order should be rescinded. That bitch Jonette Walsh had the Elliston's convicted, even before she left her house!
I just love this Incestuous Harem's Passion series. I wouldn't mind if you wrote as many chapters as, if not more than, The Incestuous Harem. Don't pay attention to what any naysayers say.
It looks as if Melody might be having her second child in prison after all, unless something happens. IF that prison birth comes to pass, you should have Catherine Nicholson, disguised as a social worker and against her better judgement, sneek the child the Crutzina Martinez;s home.
If both Clint and his and his family are sent to jail, then picture this; It's visiting day at the women's prison. Seated across from Melody, Pam and the other Elliston girls are the Miharu's(I hope I got that last name right), the Reenbergs and the Campo sisters. Following the usual questions asked to the prisoners, Elisabet Reenburg rises and says, loud enough for all of the Elliston women to hear, that they have brought a special surprise for all of them. Then, after gesturing toward the door, it is opened and the Elliston come through. like water from a spigot. I know. But this IS a work of fiction,
I don't know who left that long-winded comment, but I'll wager he/she meant to write 'the Elliston CHILDREN CAME through, like water from spigot.'
Poor Pam, she should've prepared for the possibility of the State not having any questions for her. How I don't know.
'Then the woman batted it down. She sat even stiffer. glared even harder.' Can't help wondering what would've happened had the above NOT...happened