by Catmoore
Wow ... you like to live on the wild side in this one and I gave a 5 for it. Hope there is at least one more story on how they got zapped. lol
Thanks. JAG
no. fair!
great story. I can live with the ending only if there's a chance for another chapter.
With both of them naked in front of her husband, he probably didn't need anyone to tell him what they were up to.
So now what is going to happen? No use lying. Peter may as well fuck her, and get it over with, right in front of his dad.
Cat - that was so erotically hot!
But what a cliffhanger!!!!!! You know how to keep us coming back for more!
Will there be more?
Goodness Cat! All that build up and sexual tension burning up the page only to end like that. Once again you've produced an amazing story!
Martin
xxxxx
heres hoping that dad gets cucked by the son and he watches as mommy takes her sons seed and gets knocked up
Cat, you set such high standards when it comes to this type of story, and consistently achieve them! Another superb chapter in this saga of mother/son fucking, I just hope that we get the chance to discover what happened next, as Richard learns that his wife is his son's slut and whore, maybe he'll surprise us all by calmly sitting down and watching as Peter fucks your brains out! Hope so! xx Ken
Another rousing story.
Loved the psychological acceptance that went on.
Then the physical excitment that was building
Until. . .
Lets hope that there is another part of this story.
I read on and on and on hoping that in the end the son would have his way with his mother? I thought it was going to happen and bang you through the whole time I have read this out the window. I will look to see who is the writer of a story from now on and if it's you I will pass you on by like a fright train passes a bum.
Mr Catmoore: This story had tremendous tension in building up between the mother and son i have ever seen , so much wanting of them bothe being together and you screwed it up (no pun intended, it was by far the worst story i have ever read of incest, it could have gone on to the mother having hot , passionate sex with her son, oral, titfucking, passion so high, clawing at each other in animalistic sex. they did not fuck, and DAD catches everthing before really anything got started. The worst i have seen in 42 years of redaing.
Left unfinished. Should have been taged "Reader gets teased". All other tags are misleading.
OK...This could be construed as 'unfinished'. But once again, your build up, tension and teasing is superb. But yes, please finish. Soon?
till you rip it all away and pour an ice bucket over what could have been a momentous climax. thanks for nothing! what a sad disappointment.
Fiction, like real life, can be a moving dissmal failure with consequences beyond belief.