by charlieflemming
Great chapter! Hope you get to writing more soon. Can't get enough of this one.
I hope this wasnβt an ending to this series I am in hopes that it continues with him getting all the sexually frustrated women around him
I absolutely loved this chapter; I enjoyed it a lot. It has almost everything I look for in an erotic story. It was romantic and morbid. I wish we can keep getting more and more chapters like this, with lots of women and no more men.
Great Story all the way. I loved the format. Hope we can see a few more Chapters. Would definitely love to bring Jade and Fiona back into the scene. I know you've stayed away from and impregnation. But I think it would be interesting to see the women bonding as some or all of them carry his children. I'd like to see how the Luna and Jade relationships go also. Once again great work.
CC
Great story!! Is this the end? You could do more with jade and her mom, his teachers, with the doctors. Do they find a cure?
Hoping you continue the story! I'm betting it is getting difficult to write -- I find, ad an author, the more characters in a story, the harder it is to keep them all developed appropriately, and the story itself becomes harder and harder to manage. If you are having similar problems, please know your efforts are appreciated! This is a good story, lots of people are enjoying it a great deal, and we are waiting or each installment with baited beeath. I know I look forward to each new drop!
Loved this for us. I love how slow you went with this story and then everything just exploded in this chapter. I am definitely going to be reading more of your other stories. Can't wait for the next chapter
Hope it isn't over. Still haven't dealt with the teachers, and then what about Fiona?
Looking forward to seeing how you resolve all the different elements in this story!
I hope this wasn't the end. I think this deserves at least one or two more chapters.
I really enjoyed this series! Loved the development of the stories and relationships. I would love to know more and see who gets pregnant and who gets more fucked!
Long way to go for so little. 19 chapters for the obvious, which was very average when all is said and done.
18 chapters for a "finalΓ©" like that??!! All the sex was hot, and MOM FINALLY MOUNTED UP ON THE BOLOGA PONY!!!!
This should NOT be ended here...
BUT...if you write more...PLEASE, GET AN EDITOR AND/OR PROOFREADER!!!! The story was too full of errors...and your writing demands better than this kind of performance.
Still...Five**5**Stars...just be A use the final chapter was so nasty...π
I hope there is more soon because now you need to bring in Fiona and Luna in to it as well. It's at that point that and his teacher too
Please continue the series. Slow start to build the momentum, but now going well. Need to know what happens with Jade, Fiona, and the teachers. Also, would be good to go into the new family dynamics after this last chapter. Again, continue the series.
Too bad. A good story not finished. This guy has that problem. Does he even come here any more?
Oh WOW!! With this final sexual crescendo the story comes to an end. Or does it? But anything after this will only be anticlimax. 5 stars.