All Comments on 'Incited'

by MissConstrued

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
More, please?

I love it. This was amazing. Can you please please write a second chapter for this?

kitten_in_heatkitten_in_heatover 8 years ago
I don't know why

But I imagined him with a cute, pouty face when he walked away.

Joking aside, it was a captivating read. I was as curious about his character as the woman was and felt as dejected as she did when she realized she unwittingly agreed to keeping it a one-time thing.

What's great about this is that it works well as a standalone but it also wouldn't hurt if there was a continuation to this. It's your call and either decision would still be just as satisfying as the other.

MissConstruedMissConstruedover 8 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Thank you so much for commenting. This was originally a side story for a regular character in my series (told from the perspective of someone outside of the series). Since then, I've thought of a couple different directions to possibly go with it...

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