All Comments on 'Indecency'

by jack4194

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PrfsrPrfsrover 1 year ago

There is a difference between “decent” and “descent”. Look them up.

RanDog025RanDog025over 1 year ago

I know it's fiction but why is it okay and cool to seduce your own brothers betrothed?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

You need an editor. First person to third person (I to him) is a rookie mistake.

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