All Comments on 'Indian Sister-in-Law or Second Wife'

You have a good hand on writing n keeping the flow in a continuous movement... Well written n surely the next n then the next n next after that is a must... It almost felt like the reader is actually right there in the thick of it all n not a third person reading.. Good writing... Cheers!!!

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Wow, it's really amazing to read ur post.....glad that ur a descriptive writer....

Wud love to read more content from you

Dommaster

I loved the story. I hope you write part two soon.

So very sexy, loved the story, please continue!

Wow very nice build up and realistic situation to get in the sex act. Hope you will continue with the story further with possibly a threesome between two sisters and the lucky guy.

Loved the way you guys began from seeing each other to being comfortable enough and taking step forward to realise the arousal and sexual urge within yourself and his need and finally made out and leading ahead to foreplay and getting fucked with each other. I would urge you to write more of your personal secrets publicly in an anonymous way.

Wow.. Great write-ups. The built-up was fantastic. Enjoyed reading the way you started off with casual flirting finally leading to great sex. Great writing. Can't wait to read your next story. Keep them Cummings.

Sounds like that might have been the beginning to lots of fun, please share more

Keep writing. Eventually add the wife too

Please write the next chapter. I enjoyed this one thoroughly.

It was interesting that an Incest/Taboo story made it into the list of most commented stories in the past 24 hours. It's usually the Loving Wives stories that get the most comments. This one was perhaps more a LW story anyhow, but there are none of the regular LW commentariat as yet commenting on this one. (Is having it off with your brother-in-law really incest?)

One point that the LW critics would have picked up is the first line stating that it is a true story. Many of them hate that and tell authors that nobody believes them. It's best to let the reader decide whether they believe it to be true or not. The way this story is written is enough to make it very believable, and it seems to be more erotic for the reader to always have the question in the back of mind as to how much is real and how much is fantasy.

One question about the story itself - - what happened to your husband, Mrs AIW? You've apparently left him at home for six months and there has been no mention of him coming to visit, phoning, or you taking a couple of trips home for a bit of marital contact. You say he's a busy salesman, but he disappeared after the first couple of sentences.

Anyhow, it's good to have a new female author contributing stories, and especially one from another culture that's not the USofA, so I look forward to further stories from Mrs AIW.

Lue

I agree, good start, maybe add the wife and sister next, then add them all in.

Good one, waiting for next chapter.

A female author, writing with class about her own forbidden experiencies, I find it highly arousing. Keep going!

Currently in the same boat minus the sister in law.. how I wish my wife did have a sister in law or friend and I could have similar fantasy with them.. great story though!!

I enjoyed the story very much indeed. Please add another chapter if you wish. I confess I did find it very arousing, thank you

Thanks for your good story. It is really arousing and i really enjoyed.

Your descriptions are excellent.

I love to meet you once.

please write another chapter

yessssssssssss very hot move... romantically erotic!

what a story of your life.. you said it inch-by-inch of your real life sex experience,.. while i was read your story. i was getting so mood my dear.. i am waiting to read your next chapter.

Excellent pace and details. Not like other where it always starts with pain in back or leg and massage and sex 🤪. Enjoyed every piece of it. Continue with more please.

—Shiv

Uua your story was gorgeous and i hope to read another one

Thank you to the Literotica community for all the love showered on my story! I was not expecting such a warm response. So shukriya!

Fantastic story. The author has done a great job depicting Indian conditions. Keep it up. Looking for more.

It was one of the sexy story I have read.

Please keep writing.

Narayana

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I went berserk reading this. Wild one. Creating amazing convulsions into me. Chennaishobs

Amazing story telling really liked it....you should write more

Very well written

You are a great writer and sexy horny Indian milf, get ready to write our sexual story soon.

I have done the same with my sister in law and her husband. I let him cum inside of my unprotected pussy.

Nice start of a story. Would love to see the tension between the sisters, if she will find out and if so, how they react/defuse the situation

Amazing writing...I recollected my incidents with my brother in law.....chennaishobs

Great story... I simply loved reading it... Well conceived... And very erotically presented... Believeble story line... Very simple and sober presentation... I have a high 5***** for you... Now going for the Part II... Why don't you go for a Part III? High time... ❤️❤️❤️LoL