All Comments on 'Indian Spice'

Well done

It needs a second part

Delightful story. Excellently told.

Really enjoyed the story. Just a few disturbing typo's (Mia??)

Truly well written! I have not enjoyed a good erotica as this in years. Do keep this up and hope you include more Indian characters in your story.

~Anon

As I said before - such diverse stories and cultural background - you can smell the dust and cardomon.

'Her dark triangle cleft only by the wound of an axe cut'. - I wonder is this the vicious sadism of a Victorian Colonial metaphor? No matter how gently Nature formed Woman I find the metaphor disturbing🙂

Lass Lover