by ripeandproper
She already kmows I enjoyed the story. :) Good job and keep em' coming!
The story could have been a little longer but, I think, not every story has to end with the reader "finishing". Your story shows skill at description without being overly detailed and good dialog. Keep writing.
great story INDIAN SUMMER. just as i was getting hard feeling horny ,
you had your cum. like you i to have a very vived imagination.
with seeing you their in the car exploding with a big cummy load, loved it. as well as this story more please .