All Comments on 'Indian Whore Wife Ch. 01'

Very well written story, really enjoyed reading it, will you be writing more parts to this story? Take care and keep up the good work.

First of all, get someone to edit and fix your English problems. You do not speak English correctly. Your story is an OK story, but you need better spelling and grammar.

It is really obvious that you are not thinking like an English or American person. No American man is going to behave this way and give his woman to strangers without her saying something about it. If he does, she will leave him immediately and maybe call the police on him for being a pimp.

You think everyone thinks the way you do. No. Not everyone and not in other parts of the world.

Your story is terribly written.

Rude comments and appreciations all are welcomed.

I have noted you comments and points, well there may be major mistakes, but will try to correct it down in future updates, current one is live and it's next part will be according to suggestions made, all negative and positive.

Thanks For reading my story and giving me valuable advise, I may be little disturb with the way of communication but suggestions are most welcomed every time.

Your storylines are great, the writing is far from normal American standards, however; to me, it gives your stories flare, don't let others dictate your writing improve as you go.

It would be better if the husband has known it completely from his friend....

Also add more hardcore fucking.... Gangbangs and all are appreciated

Taking advantage of a woman without her consent is called rape and we don't do rape.

Loved your writing skills,keep it up.

I request u to write some more under the topic "non consent" or "blackmailed".

Awesome story. Hope there's a sequel to this