All Comments on 'Indian Wife and the Bus Journey'

by aurelius1982

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
welcome aurelius

good to c u back

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
fantastic

Built the erotic tension beautifully. Just wish you would write a second part and take it to the next level.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

The story was really nice, was waiting for you to come back with something, the convo between the husband and wife is a sure steam but you could have continued it and made it long enough and the story lacked sex.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Awesome!

Good job, as usual, mate. Please keep your stories coming!

shang40shang40about 6 years ago

Getting control over niyati.

Superb.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
I can feel his pain

Life is filled with torturous moments, beyond his control. Giving him an erection is just a further excuse for continuing the action, the rape of his wife, and the rape of his soul. Won't read any further because voice inside me screams for vengeance. Not the bullet in the head kind, that's too quick. No, the digging out the eyes kind, the Greek tragedy kind, committing him to live long blindly, turning this "alpha male, this nice guy" into being dependent on everyone.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Sex

Fuck my wife

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Excellent

Aurelius,

You have given us some erotic wonderful story. I have been reading this again and again. More than 100 times this story helped me to cum with mind blowing orgasms. Thank you.

rodryder44rodryder44over 5 years ago
The. Bus Journey

Gripping. I like the fact he had no control over his erection, and she had no control over her response to the alpha thug. Four stars

PiperHamlinPiperHamlinover 5 years ago
I have a thing for Indian women

Never had one as a partner, but there's something about them that appeals to me. I also have rare contact with them. Nice to live vicariously through your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Very well written. Just an exact type of erotic story I like. Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
LOVED IT (❤): ☆☆☆☆☆ (5.0)! This story is totally my cup of tea! It 's ultra kinky when a man fucks your wife before your very eyes, & (a) there is nothing you can do about that, (b) you realize your wife will enjoy it, & (c) she realizes you a

😊

SweetNothingsAndBeyondSweetNothingsAndBeyondalmost 3 years ago

Good Story... Sorry Very Good One! 5 Star +++

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

💯

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

5.0 = 💯% (🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟), ❤❤.

👍👍!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Very exciting story. I am sure the Hindu wife enjoyed everything even under lot of stress.

Her husband should be happy for her that she had such an opportunity by accident. All Hindu ladies should have some fun with the Muslim circumcised tools.

shang40shang40over 1 year ago

We had a bus journey where my wife was molested nicely right in front of me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I bet ustad was Muslim and the Hindu wife had fun. She didn’t have to look for a Muslim. She got it right in her lap. I wish my wife was moister like that by a Muslim. I would gladly allow that. All Hindu wives need Muslim fun.

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