by spankedboy
@Anon, thanks. I needed to make the captain cruel, because payback's a bitch.
Thanks for the comments. Yes, the men were beasts as suddenly they had complete access to two fertile women who had no choice but to submit to them.
These men are absolute virile beastly sex animals and I'M HERE for it. I love the series. Keep it up. I will try your other one.
The only thing that has caught my eye is some slang has crept in from different nationalities. Not real sexual but a good story non the less.
I skimmed through this horrific installment and found there was way too much conjecture on the part of the husband. Too much, "they probably did this, that or the other thing". Too much, "I can only guess". Too much, "wondering what they did to his wife". Too much, "I heard this or that". The husband has only guesses and nothing else. Not very sexy nor erotic at all.
@sexysandra, when you say badly fo the guy, who is the guy, and what do you mean? :-)
There's collusion here ... the mother knew of the satellite phone and calls ... this will end very badly for the poor guy ...
Anon, thanks for the comment. The next chapter has been submitted to LE and should be out shortly.
Nirana, thanks for the comments. Wait until the next chapter!
Anon, I will start work on the "Summer of Indian Aunties" next year some time. For now, I don't want to resume that series.
Love to read more about asin. descriptions about her full, pendulous breasts. maybe after her first two weeks with bheem she gets turned over to the crew so they can pull an all night train on her, two or three times each.
liked this story too! I hope mom and daughter get fucked in front of each other and vivek.
Good but definitely not as good as The summer of Indian Aunties.
That is your best series till date besides that what's the point of leaving one series unfinished and starting the other.