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You have the basis of good stories throughout your submissions but your written English is not very good and comes across as 'wham, bam, thank-you Mam', so you lack build up to situations, using nuance to suggest things etc. You really need an editor to progress your ideas and 'paint the picture'.

Hot concept executed well. If a little extended, story would be even better. Thanks.

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