All Comments on 'Indica Ch. 01'

by SydReign

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Outstanding!

I throughly enjoyed this, amazing writing as well. Hope to see more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
#YAAAAAAASSSSSS!

Exquisite! Please finish this story. I love it and (unlike many stories on this site) it seems plausible and realistic

crazysexykool93crazysexykool93over 4 years ago
I loved it! Please continue!

I will say though I was a little confused about the exchange they had where she says "you're disgusting" I just wasn't sure what was going on there. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

SydReignSydReignover 4 years agoAuthor
Thank you so much!

So glad you guys are enjoying the story, I hope I don’t disappoint! But, as for the “You’re disgusting,” exchange, it was a little joke between Keanu and Kat. She dislikes the way his jaw looks when he clenches it because of how the bone looks underneath, lol! (if you’ve ever seen a man clench his jaw you’ll understand). Later on you’ll see that he does certain things to upset her such as: clenching his jaw, cracking his neck/knuckles, etc.

Hope I cleared it up! :)

EroticLitKittyEroticLitKittyover 4 years ago
Holy moly!

Amazing stuff!

VegasloverVegasloverover 4 years ago

OMG! So freaking good. The internal struggle of this young black woman, who wants love but has had so much pain. Who wants a relationship but feels she needs to help out her community and other black women, to the detriment of her own happiness is very common thing. God I hope this doesn't ruin them for years, as it kinda already has. Eagerly awaiting more.

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