All Comments on 'Infall Ch. 04'

Hey everyone. A couple people asked why I pulled the novel, and I didn't want to just not answer. For me, erotica is always this weird and tricky balance between plot and erotic content, because I like the novels to have both and people usually seem to enjoy that. But it's also true that sometimes I've gotten myself into situations where I assume they'll mix fine and they just don't. I had a full horror novel with animating statues that did that and I ended up turning it into a non-erotic novel and it worked well that way. This story of a woman from an advanced civilization who must survive a primitive surface and persuade the superstitious people there that she's not a witch got too involved (at least for my style) to carry as an erotic story, and it's difficult for me to tell because I'm on the inside. I think it frustrated readers and even annoyed people. I learned things, as I always do, but I wanted to apologize if it disappoints anyone. I don't think it's fixable, which is why I had pulled it, and you get the idea. But I'm still glad I continued to post it, and you can always scroll past the thick parts to the others. Thanks for reading. Cheers. -Harp

Thanks for continuing and I'm not sure who Karen is but tell her thanks too lol.

I think it works absolutely perfectly. I think that not everything is to everyone’s tastes, but that’s what makes the world so interesting, right? So if Infall is of your creation and some people didn’t vibe with it, so what? Even if it’s not as popular as the Venata series, that doesn’t mean that there aren’t those of us (*ahem*, it’s me) that like this every bit as much, bulky parts included.

So you keep writing what inspires you because there will always be someone who will eat it up! And that’s because you’re an absolutely fantastic writer.

P.S. I really, really, really, really, really like that this has the brother dynamic. It’s very, very hot and a great decision.

Just my pov, not everyone's, but I don't come here just for erotica. And when I find a good author I will read everything they write.

You are amazing. Please don't feel limited in any way to only post for erotic readers because this is literotica, or only post based on votes etc. Post what you love. Wish more would. As long as they're finished. I cry when a great read isn't finished.

Re-reading this story and I’m just seeing your response now. You are one of few authors that actually do balance plot and erotica well. Very well as matter of fact. The nuance and detail you put into creating a unique new world is so refreshing. It’s immersive. Quite difficult I believe, especially with this one. To have to simplify so many life ideas and theories we are accustomed to so naturally, and explain it to a child (practically) isn’t quite easy. I think publishing these pieces you write and ENJOY is the most important, because you will continue to attract a following that share your same visions. The rest can come and go.

Please don't stop writing the way you do, Harp. The balance is something we sorely crave on this site. 🙏🏿

This was a well done chapter, ive re-read a few times. I like the care and reference to sub-drop. Everything is subtle and well done. An Alpha who cares for his sub is so hot. Although i was surprised Kythe would share his new found treasure, good twist!